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Het water kabbelt door het beekje,
De groene weiden lijken me te lokken.
Ze trekken me aan
De bomen die uitdagen
Ze lijken te glimlachen.

De vogels die opvliegen
Door mijn voetstappen.
Mijn handen, waar het eelt opstaat,
Zetten mijn stok voor me uit.
Mijn haren in de knoop.

Het maakt niet uit,
Ik ben buiten,
Verder is er niemand.
Alleen de bomen, het water en de dieren.
Ik hou van ze, zij van mij.

Ik hou van de natuur,
Ik leef ermee.
Het water kabbelt door het beekje,
Ik stap er met blote voeten in.
Het water omsluit mijn enkels.

De groene weiden die me lokken,
Ik ren erop af.
Ik val erin en schreeuw.
Kreten van geluk.
Geluk, dat ik zo leef.


groetjes Esther
(okee, hij is een beetje slecht).

Tjonge, Hermaniak, wie zou jou nou Hermaniak noemen??????Hihi
Mooi gedicht joh!

dankje Dinges.
Mooi gedicht Herrieman! Ik weet alleen niet van wie hij is...

Indrukwekkend....!

Hoop dat er inmiddels vrede is, of in elk geval wapenstilstand.....

Poehee, ik voel em gewoon hangen, de dreiging.. sterkte ermee!

Vrij tot zeer herkenbaar...
Leuk om eens onder woorden te zien wat ik zo moeilijk kan beschrijven *doet me goed*

Shell

Picture an image
Of me being caught
Of me being weak
Me being all I appear not
Me being far from status God
Tears all over my face
Expression far from grace
Would you believe?
Would you mind?
Would you retrieve?
Would you be kind?

Believe.
Believe my emotions strong
I'm shy
Easy to cry
Believe my heart will hurt
Believe I?m no good flirt
My strength has no root
Just some mask or mood

Jantien

Dankje wel *bloost lichtelijk bij deze complimenten*
Ik vind het gewoon leuk enzo..

*Geeft wat talent aan Moira*

Strutting trough these lands
I don't find resistance
You utter your words
You throw your thing
I throw back
With the words I sing

Clench your popularity
Donate on charity
Get your votes
Get your grade
I grade myself
Within the rules I made

Laugh theatral, stick to one
Insult from afar, be swift gone
Try make me cry
Try make me fight
I defence
With my worldwide sight

Hihihi

*Staande ovatie*

Staande ovatie nummer 2

The Object of My Obsession

Hello my darling sunshine
Come forth and share your light
Dawn on me your glorios rays
That I may marvel at your beauty
And bow down before you on bended knee
I ask your delicate hane to hold
In the eternal bonds of wedded bliss
That you may lead me to the alter
Where I will profess my undying love to you

But by that gentle, loving hand
I have been weighed
And I have been measured
Deemed unfit to stand at your side
Never again to see your radiant beauty
I take my life
And will it to be yours

Though I walk through teh gates of Hell
Following the brimstone path
Down to the infernal damnation that awaits me
I walk with my head held high
For I shall ever be by your side
My ashes on the cool night's breeze
Shall follow your sweet scent

I died that you may find salvation
Cloaked in the arms of another
But in my past life, and still today
I would have none but you
And now my darling sunshine
I will ever await your presence here
Sealed with death's sweet kiss...

Ok, het is niet echt fantastisch...
Ik heb dit een jaar ofzo geleden geschreven, en ik denk dat ik het terug nodig heb


Memories coming back to my mind
I forgot about them, because I tried
I never really expectected that I would
All those moments, I tried, wished I could

Returning to the days that existed then
Back to all that was, also to the pain
I?m not walking away to escape it all
It?s not bad for me to remember my fall

A chance to make it right, to save tears
Making a statement, showing I?m here
Learning from everything I did wrong
Not forgetting mistakes, just going on

But I?m not all right yet, I?m still alone
Closing my heart, my mind, on my own
How could anyone ever care about me
When my own mistakes are all I can see?

It?s a long road ahead that I have to walk
A growing doubt, my reason to talk
Doubting myself, can I handle it yet?
Am I still a child, still trying to forget?

I beg, please help me, make me believe again
Just force me to handle my pains
Even if I give up when I should continue
Don?t let me down, all I have is you

ja, heel erg mooi, moira, tis ook wel van toepassing in mijn leven, trouwens bedankt voor je staand ovatie, jij verdiend er ook ??n ! (niet fantastisch? je moet er niet alvast van uitgaan dat het niet fantastisch is > goed begin van het in de praktijk brengen van je eigen gedicht

groetjes, Neesha

Wow Dinges! Echt heel erg mooi!

Venus' Call

Share your partners
share your pain
Share all love
Life is in vain

Focus on all
Ignore the one
Listen to Venus' call
Be guided by her song

Share your body
Share your mind
Share the embrace
Everyone one kind

Focus on all
Ignore the one
Listen to Venus' call
Be guided by her song

Listen to Venus' call
Free your mind
Spirits dwell
Into your mind
Listen to Venus' song
Bear her passion
Feel the flow
Into a new collision
Venus' call reach out!

Share your fluid
Into the flow
Share your love
There you go

Dinges

WEEPING OF A STONE

In a lonely graveyard plot,
Where the lost and lonely go;
I saw the weeping of a stone
Upon the ground, I saw them flow.

The words embedded deep in slate;
The cause of death, a broken heart.
I saw no flowers, his stone adorn,
But there embedded, I saw the thorn.

Buried deep, it seemed to pierce,
For flowing down were bitter tears.
Within my heart, emotions fierce,
As they broke my own veneers.

Pouring down was my own pain
Upon the stone of past gone years
Where the pain, I saw remain.

Ja, ben nu nogal down, maar ik heb hoop..